In the picture Perchance to Dream the lower right corner is cut off. I thought it was either the side of the hill you were standing on or else some sort of roof of a building. Surely you see it? I'll do a full critique when I have the time. I just wanted to be sure you were not expecting the usual "great picture, great colors, great composition, wow, excellent" and all that crap. I 'll deal in specifics and tell you how to improve your pictures so you can continue to grow. A critique takes a bit of work and I find some 'deviants' only accept praise, whether it is earned or not.
Yes, I see what you mean. There was an issue with this spot because everything in front of where I stood is private property, so my options were limited. I was standing on a hill, looking down at this scene, and this was the best possible vantage I could get in order to still capture everything in the frame that I wanted. I took some photos further down the hill so that cabin wasn't cut off by the foreground, but I liked this one the most for the depth that the foreground helps to create. Just my personal preference though, I am always open to other opinions and feedback.
so you did what i would have suggested, you tried other vantage points, having noted that the building was cut off. then you compared the pictures. sometimes, working with cameras, we must simply accept that we cannot do what we would like to do, reality and all that. your picture is still excellent, so i still will give a more inclusive critique.
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